
Good research gathered. Here's my review of the old remarks first, then the rewrite:What's Wrong With the Old RemarksToo long - almost certainly over 2,000 characters as written.Specific issues:Repeats the same idea multiple times ("thriving commercial corridor" ... "proven high-traffic location" .....
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